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I'll Let Go... by ~demongirl11:icondemongirl11:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Teen or Young Romance > Limerick


I wish you'd see me here, dying, frustrated and hurt
Just because  you exchanged me for that flirt.
It's so selfish of you to kiss me goodbye
When I thought that time, you'd be mine.

You're so insensitive! Not seeing the pain I'm feeling
You're blind! Can't you see what's happening?
I love you, and it's hurting me inside
Because I know when you left, my dreams died.

When you're together, i just turn away not to see,
The happiness I wished was given to me.
Then I ask myself again,
Why did you go and leave my heart broken?

I don't know if it's still right to love you,
But until I die, my heart will coninue...
I know it would be nonsense for me to do so,
But, without your love i would be alone and in sorrow.

I'm not asking you to come back to me,
Because i just want you to be happy,
Yet, if you're not happy with me,
There's no use in fighting for what this love could be.
©2007-2009 ~demongirl11
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Written by a broken heart...:cries: :heartbreaker:
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Mood: Wow! ~dragonmalice:icondragonmalice: Apr 2, 2007, 1:02:52 AM
What happen? did this Happen to you? Do not cry!
:hug: my Wings will keep you protected:worry:
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~demongirl11:icondemongirl11: Apr 2, 2007, 1:06:31 AM
Yes, unfortunately it did. :cries: :saddrunk: Thank you. :raincloud:

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Gravitation
Yuki: C'mon put that thing in!
Shuichi: it's slippery!
Yuki: just put the thing in!
Shu: but it's cold!
Yuki: Just do it you brat!

*Shuichi puts the cold and slippery ice pop into Yuki's mouth*
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~demongirl11:icondemongirl11: Apr 2, 2007, 1:09:28 AM
Yes, unfortunately it did. :cries: :saddrunk: Thank you. :raincloud:

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Gravitation
Yuki: C'mon put that thing in!
Shuichi: it's slippery!
Yuki: just put the thing in!
Shu: but it's cold!
Yuki: Just do it you brat!

*Shuichi puts the cold and slippery ice pop into Yuki's mouth*
join in :iconyaoiaddictsanonymous:
=Budukai:iconBudukai: Apr 2, 2007, 1:37:50 AM
nicely done, for such a sad feel :(

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Dude let's be sninjas :paranoid:
~wics:iconwics: Apr 2, 2007, 1:43:04 AM
Dude i wish i knew how u felt
but alas i have had no one to truly give me heart too
so my heart remains in a box waiting to be realised.

Waiting for its moment to truly feel happiness or even saddness
~demongirl11:icondemongirl11: Apr 2, 2007, 1:48:55 AM
Arigatou! Thank you...I still feel sad about that, though... :saddrunk:

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Gravitation
Yuki: C'mon put that thing in!
Shuichi: it's slippery!
Yuki: just put the thing in!
Shu: but it's cold!
Yuki: Just do it you brat!

*Shuichi puts the cold and slippery ice pop into Yuki's mouth*
join in :iconyaoiaddictsanonymous:
~demongirl11:icondemongirl11: Apr 2, 2007, 1:54:41 AM
:aww: we're in the same boat...alas, we shall find true love someday!

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Gravitation
Yuki: C'mon put that thing in!
Shuichi: it's slippery!
Yuki: just put the thing in!
Shu: but it's cold!
Yuki: Just do it you brat!

*Shuichi puts the cold and slippery ice pop into Yuki's mouth*
join in :iconyaoiaddictsanonymous:
~wics:iconwics: Apr 2, 2007, 1:55:15 AM
I think u need a hug and i forgot to say i love the poem xD
*hugs*
~wics:iconwics: Apr 2, 2007, 1:57:11 AM
ahhhh so true

as true love is like a rose in a thorn bush
it takes many obsticles and sometimes much pain, to expirence the beauty and love of a rose
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